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Introduction

Friday
Debbi: Well Julia and Fatima, its Friday. We learned many important things for our future live. There were a lot of information but we passed by very well. I know we are all excited for the weekend, but now it’s time to make the records. I hope you still remember what we’ve done.
Fatima: Of course, this week I will remember for a long time.
Julia: Yes me too. We had a lot of talks and films to watch.
Fatima: You say it! There were three films and one of it even in English.
Julia: So, what did we on Monday?

Monday
Fatima: Oh Monday, that was a day! We learned quiet much about how to slip into the red, the process of an execution and what the law says. We saw a film which showed us many different destinies of people with debts and how they live with it. That was quiet impressive.
Julia: Especially the five head family. You remember? Every one of them has had repossession until now!!
Fatima: The mother didn’t even care about. She really did smile as she told that she can’t bake a cake for her wedding anniversary because they don’t have enough money to buy more butter. She had to decide between the dinner and the cake. I can’t understand how she could smile about it.
Julia: Yeah, but happily the grandmother brought a cake. So they could celebrate a bit.
Debbi: So I thought the destiny of the 19 year old girl was more scruple. She had absolutely nothing to pledge.
Fatima: The film made clear to me, that even in a rich country like Switzerland, we have many people in debts.

Tuesday (Auto)
Julia: But also in the United Kingdom. Tuesday morning we saw a movie about a same aged Spendaholic. Through his passion for cars he slipped into the red for about 17 grand.
Fatima: That’s crazy!! So much money.
Julia: To get out of his debts, he gets supported by a psychologist and a lifestyle-expert. They showed him how he can save a lot of money. For example, the lifestyle-expert went with him to a pizzeria, to learn how to make a delicious pizza from scratch at home. Or another example, to stop smoking they went to a hypnotherapy.
Debbi: It’s incredible how much money he can spend if he only cuts down on smoking or he eats less Kebab. By the way, it’s healthier.
Julia: That’s right. In the afternoon came a consultant of road cross. We learned that only with a little bit effort you can save a lot of money. He had a long talk with a good PowerPoint presentation and many clips of accidents.
Fatima: I was shocked about the pictures of the accidents.
Julia: Do you remember the trucker Mr. Froehlich talked about. Since he knocked down the women he can’t cross the place of accident anymore. He always drives a long way round.

Wednesday
Debbi: Not only that. Just think about the financial damage. But on Wednesday we learned how to shift the costs on the insurance, if we sign the right one.
Fatima: Did you know that the third party insurance doesn’t pay everything?
Julia: Or that the basic insurance only pays us the hospital in the canton we live in?
Debbi: Yeah, it was good, that Mr. Koch gave a talk. Now I know what is coming my way. But also if I should move in the near future I know what will come to my way. Than in the morning we were busy with the budget positions of living. For that, we had to fill out an example sheet. It was astonishing how wrong we formed our estimates. In the afternoon we prepared our English work.
Fatima: Yeah, that was funny.
Debbi: Even if we had some different opinions, we always found an agreement. So we went forward very well.

Output

Julia: The teamwork was all in all very good. Of course, there were different opinions, but we always found a compromise. Everyone could bring in his own opinion and ideas. As we had questions, we mostly could explain it on our own.

Fatima: The most we liked was the presentation of road cross. It was very impressive. We think it’s also good that the things we learned we can use for our future life. Through which we could work on our own, we had the possibility to learn with our own speed.

Debbi: But the week had also some underbellies. For example the talks were too long and we had a little bit too much exercises for one day. It was much material for one week. We won’t think about how we should learn everything for Monday. Bus all in all it was a nice week.