Hey
wäre wirklich lieb , wenn mir jemand helfen könnte. Könnt ihr den Text nachschauen und Fehler suchen...werdet bestimmt viele finden
DANKE an alle =)


Truman
In my opinion Truman is naive, because he does not really believe in Sylivias words. He thinks that she is living on the Fiji Island yet. Truman wants to have a credible proof. He also listens to the radio canal,who sends “a wrong frequence” unintentinonal, but than he notices that something comical happenes. I also think that he is to friendly and good-natured, because if he gives credence to Sylvias words, he would not trust in Marlon anymore. But he goes tu him and explain what comical things happene.She does not understand that Marlon and Meryl are actors,too. Because he married Meryl although Sylvia told him that all is unreal. But in my opinion Truman loves Sylvia and he miss her. All the time he thinks on her and on the one and only common date. I think Truman is a person, who believes on the first love of one’s life. He is also a dreamer, because he puzzles a own picture, which looks like Sylvia. Truman is a family person, because he holds on to his childhood memories. He misses his father and often look on the photos of him and his family. Truman has a big joy of life, because he likes to go out with his friends and go in to the clubs to dance.

Meryl
In my opinion Meryl is selfish and arrogant, because he takes advantage of Truman and shows no consideration for Trumans feelings. The most important thing for her is to look pretty, because she is filmed. Meryl advertising for a lot of things on the show. The show is for Meryl only a show, maybe she wants to make a caree, but she does not consider Truman. She plays-act like a happy family, but emotional she only hopes of “a good Truman Show”. In my opinion Meryl is very imitation and nothing on her is real.

Sylvia (Lauren)
In my opinion Sylvia is a real person and good-natured, because she clears up Truman that all is unreal. I think she has pity on him as well as real feelings for him. She loves him and hopes that he understands what happenes “with him and his world”. On the one hand Sylvia is timid and sad, maybe they see never again eachother. But on the other hand she is powerful and has no fear, because she takes risk as he told him all the truth. She is not imitation like Meryl. She never “played” with Truman. She was always Sylvia and not Lauren.

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Hab keine Fehler gefunden! Aber könnte auch gut sein das ich was übersehen habe

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ich glaub du hast bestimmt viele übersehn,aber trotzdem vielen dank das du es dir mal durchgelesen hast

kkris, welche Klasse bist du?
(Nur um ungefähr einschätzen zu können, was "durchgehen" darf und was nicht )

He thinks that she is living on the Fiji Island yet. <-- wieso yet? yet wird IMO nur bei verneinten sätzen benutzt.

radio canal,who sends <-- which

but than he notices <-- then

to friendly and good-natured <-- too

he miss her <-- misses

All the time he thinks on her <-- he often thinks of her

on the one and only common date <-- ? was willst du sagen?

he puzzles a own picture <-- a picture of his own

He misses his father and often look on the photos <-- looks at


Meryl advertising <-- is advertising

Meryl is very imitation <-- Meryl often imitates oder Meryl is faking

maybe they see never again eachother. <-- maybe they will never see each other again.

she takes risk as he told him all the truth. <-- she takes a risk when she is telling him the complete truth

She is not imitation like Meryl <-- she is no imitation like Meryl.

She was always <-- she always was

noch was inhaltliches: wieso ist man naiv, wenn man nicht an die worte anderer glaubt? das wäre höchstens stur oder? (engl: stubborn)

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@taugenichts...dankeschön;) bin in der 11.
wegen dem " naiv sein" , er glaubt ihr nicht und glaubt halt immer an das gute in den Mensch...

(der obere Kommentar war auch von mir )

" on the one and only common date " --> damit wollte ich sagen,dass er immer an das eine und einzige gemeinsame Date denkt

But he goes to him and explain what comical things happene <-- ist dieses "happene" richtig?!

ne, entweder what comical things happened
oder what comical things happen

je nachdem, was du sagen willst

wobei comical wohl auch nicht soo das beste wort ist. dann lieber funny. oder extraordinary.


und zu dem "Ständig denkt er an sie und an ihr einziges gemeinsames Treffen". Ich würde nur sagen: All the time he thinks of his first meeting with Sylvia.

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okay vielen vielen danke..habt mir alle gut weitergeholfen=)