hey leute ich hab ein Text geschrieben
aber weiß nicht ob das rcihtig ist also
mit dem Satzbau und so würd mich
freuen wenn jemand mir helfen kann.

I herad the Weirdest Rumor

Laura was sitting at a table in the school library.
Melanie and Janine entered
and sat next to her.Then wehen Mike entered
he noticed Laura with her friendes
and sat with Scooter at a table.
janine said to Laura that she heard
the weirdest ruma about her. Laura was
out on a date with the fat kind Mike Howord.
Melanie and janine went to
keep up Laura's good reputation at school.
They think Laura will ruin her life by
dating a guy who doesn't fir in
with the usual standards and explecliations of
what a "good date" is.
The outward apperance is most important to them.
Scooter the best friend of Mike who is also
a misfit proud that somone like him
might also have a chance to date a girl like Laura.
He sees gils as a trophy and seems to be jealous of Mike.
So Janine and Melanie said taht laura and Mike
have nothing in commen
(Laura is beautiful, sweet, a model and
everybody's darling/ Mike is fat a nerd and a misfit).
But Laura said that Mike is talented, sincere
and has a gerat sense of humor and also that he is he
is the first guy who
actually cares about her.
But her friends don't think so.
They said that a party is on Kelly's
hous and that (that) is a perfect time for a talk
with Martin Dole who would be the boyfriend of Laura, and also
that (that) is a perfekt time to let people know that you
aren't fallen in love with Mike.
Laura asked them what time Mike and she should be ther
and left with Mike together the library.

I heard the Weirdest Rumor

Laura was sitting at a table in the school library.
Melanie and Janine entered
and sat next to her.Then when Mike entered
he noticed Laura with her friends
while he sat with Scooter at a table.
janine told Laura that she had heard
the weirdest rumours about her. Laura was
out on a date with the fat child Mike Howord.
Melanie and Janine wanted to
keep up Laura's good reputation at school.
They thought Laura was going to ruin her life by
dating a guy who didn't fit in
with the usual standards and explications of
what a "good date" is.
The outward appearance is the most important to them.
Scooter is the best friend of Mike and is also
a misfit proud like him so he
might also have a chance to date a girl like Laura.
He sees girls as a trophy and seems to be jealous at Mike.
So Janine and Melanie said that Laura and Mike
didn't have anything in common
(Laura is beautiful, sweet, a model and
everybody's darling/ Mike is fat, a nerd and a misfit).
But Laura said that Mike was talented, sincere
and had a great sense of humor and she also said that he was the first guy who
actually cared about her.
But her friends didn't think so.
They said that there was a party at Kelly's
place and that that was a perfect time for a talk
with Martin Dole who wanted to be the boyfriend of Laura, and also
that that was a perfect time to let people know that she
had not fallen in love with Mike.
Laura asked them what time Mike and she should be there
and then she left with Mike together the library.

Hab aber viel geändert also weiss nicht ob dies deine Bedeutung war aber naja. Ich hab auch mal alles ins Präteritum geschrieben, denn die erste Satze waren allen ins Präteritum und dannach auf einmal in Praesens...Also ich hoffe dies hilft

hey danke für die Verbesserungen !!

aber kann der lehrer mir was anstreichen wenn ich den satz so lasse ??

So Janine and Melanie said taht laura and Mike
have nothing in commen

das heißt ja : Sie sagten, dass Laura und Mike nicht gemeinsam haben.

naja ich mein das das so richtig ist aber ich bin mir aber nicht 100 pro

sicher!!

Bitte!
Joo kann, aber dann soll commen commOn sein und taht that aber ich glaub das waren typfehler also

I heard the Weirdest Rumor

Laura was sitting at a table in the school library.
Melanie and Janine entered
and sat next to her.Then when Mike entered
he noticed Laura with her friends
and sat at a table with Scooter.
janine told Laura that she had heard
the weirdest rumor about her: Laura was
out on a date with the fat kind Mike Howord.
Melanie and janine wanted to
keep up Laura's good reputation at school.
They thought Laura would ruin her life by
dating a guy who doesn't fir in
with the usual standards (and expectations ) of
what a "good date" is.
The outward appearance is most important to them.
Scooter, Mike's best friend, who is also
a misfit proud that somone like him (??? ich verstehe den sinn hiervon leider nicht)
might also have a chance to date a girl like Laura.
He sees gils as a trophy and seems to be jealous of Mike.
So Janine and Melanie said taht laura and Mike
have nothing in commen
(Laura is beautiful, sweet, a model and
everybody's darling/ Mike is fat a nerd and a misfit).
But Laura said that Mike was talented, sincere
and had a gerat sense of humor and also that he was the first guy who
actually cared about her.
But her friends didn't think so.
They said that a party is at Kelly's
hous and that (that) is a perfect time for a talk
with Martin Dole who would be a perfect boyfriend for Laura, and also
that (that) would be a perfekt time to let people know that she
isn't in love with Mike.
Laura asked them what time Mike and she should be ther
and left the library.with Mike

Scooter, Mike's best friend, who is also
a misfit proud that somone like him (??? ich verstehe den sinn hiervon leider nicht)might also have a chance to date a girl like Laura.

das heißt doch= Scooter der beste freund von Mike,der auch ein
Außenseiter ist, ist stoltz,dass jemand wie er (also Außenseiter)
auch eine Chance sich mit einem Mädchen sowie Laura zu treffen.

ich glaub das "might" muss dann im englischen staz weg neh??